back on the market (413)

mort 413

My efforts to do better art might mean better backgrounds, or if there’s not room for detail where I end up mucking it up, I can add another panel to help establish the setting. 2nd panel, lady has a shopping cart, guys are in some kind of display. So we cut to a 3rd panel, an exterior shot, to emphasize the joke – they’re in a market. I could have had 3 little similar size panels, but I opted to have the first be smaller, the 2nd take up the rest of the row, and then the 3rd be the widest shot. I kept the last shot simple, like the buildings, and nothing in the distance, since there’s panels on top. I hope that’s not lazy. Enjoy!

More comic strips soon!

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