they broke the mold

mort 262

Another dopey gag. Sorry.

One thing I try to be aware of is “tangents,” where lines from different objects intersect and it’s…distracting. Hopefully the machinery in panel 2 don’t distract – it might help that I draw it in a gray pen before scanning & editing. But the vertical wall line does seem to meet with the lab coat the first robot in the 2nd panel is wearing (not an issue because his arm is in the way, breaking it up?). Things I notice now.

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